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Sunday 24 September 2017

Sleepy giant


WALT - Write a narrative story.


Success Criteria -
  • I can use adjectives and adverbs effectively
  • I can follow the structure of a narrative
  • I can edit my writing very well  




The ground was shaking and birds started to fly away from this uninvited guest appearing from under ground. . The giant has woken up from his sleep. He was so tired that he didn’t want to leave bed .


Eventually he got up not knowing where he was and ended up scratching his head. . The giant turned around and all he saw was trees and an old castle. The giant had fallen down because he didn’t
know where he was. He started to climb out and stomped around wondrously not knowing what to do and where to go.


After that he just noticed that he was in town because he saw people walking up and down from the shopping stores. He asked anyone where he was and how he can he find his way back home. From out of nowhere a little person ,Jack had looked and looked until the giant spoke to him, Jack started to shout Runnnnnn.


1 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey Rangi
I enjoyed reading your story. You used some very good vocabulary. How did you find writing the story, was it hard or easy? Keep up the great work!!!

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